Analysis of my rough cut

After I had finished editing my rough cut, I took some time to go through and watch it in detail to get my own opinion. From the beginning of editing, I knew nothing would be perfect as it is just only a rough cut at the end of the day but I knew that it was crucial to pick out any faults that I found, so that I could try my best to make them right for my final cut. Parts such as the typography, I had in my head from the start that would be altered and edited with different effects so it was basically just a template in my rough cut and wouldn't look the way it came across in my rough cut in my final piece. When I was editing, I tried to edit to that the miming matched the song however, when I exported it seemed to be a little off time at parts, such as the first scene and I am going to alter it and try and match it as best I can when doing my improvements. In the beginning of my video as there's an obvious beat, I will try and cut my footage up to edit more to the beat and see what this looks like.