1. Try to get the editing a little tighter at the beginning; some of the opening shots are a little out of sych with the beat 2. The "blood" caption is out of synch 3. General comment is that the editing is a little bit off the beat; you need to watch this through a few times and make explicit notes 4. "put your faith, put your trust" at about 00:47 is out pf synch 5. Similarly, the three shots of Sam at about the minute mark are off the beat 6. Could do with finding a shot of your singer going "ooooh" during the sequence at about 1.40; the editing here could do with being pacier 7. "If it's meant to be" (1:53) is slightly out of synch; quite a few of the shots of the singer have this problem
1. Try to get the editing a little tighter at the beginning; some of the opening shots are a little out of sych with the beat
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3. General comment is that the editing is a little bit off the beat; you need to watch this through a few times and make explicit notes
4. "put your faith, put your trust" at about 00:47 is out pf synch
5. Similarly, the three shots of Sam at about the minute mark are off the beat
6. Could do with finding a shot of your singer going "ooooh" during the sequence at about 1.40; the editing here could do with being pacier
7. "If it's meant to be" (1:53) is slightly out of synch; quite a few of the shots of the singer have this problem